What others see

 The video has been completed and its looking good. Brianna was able to complete the editing and made sure to include the things we told her to. As of now the project is completed but i have shown it to my parents and they had some adjustments to make. My dad and mom watched it with me and enjoyed the video. They said that it was good and for a first draft was done well. They did have some minor tweaks to add though. The first being that the transitions were somewhat choppy. This can be fixed and i will let Brianna know about it. This specific problem has more to do with the editing than the actual video so it can be fixed pretty smoothly. The next thing they said was it seemed like the music didn't line up correctly. This is also something that can be fixed with a re-edit. I shouldn't be too much of an issue as we just have to line up the start of the music better with the scene. Another thing they said was the story didn't seem completely cohesive. It had to deal with the transition from one scene to the next. It had a choppy flow and seemed to miss a scene. To fix this an extra scene will have to be placed in between the two to make it seamless and understandable. The last of their critiques had to do with the lighting. The problem with this is as students the lighting was not really able to be changed. Our lack of budget and resources makes it nearly impossible for use to correct the lighting and we think it isn't bad enough for it to be a major issue. We will take these critiques into consideration and re-edit and reshoot what is needed.